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Goodbye lullaby

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With our heart in a fierce beat ,
We'll dance together on the empty street.
With your shallow breathing against my head,
We'll sway along to words unsaid.
When you look in my eye,
I know, it's time to say goodbye,

But will you grant me one last wish?
To Hold me in your arms,
And Sing me a sweet lullaby,
To let me drown in your melodic voice for one last time,
And Let me dream of a place where you are mine.

To let the tune wash away my pain,
For I want to relive that moment once again,
When you and I first met each other
And to prove to myself, that there can be no another,
Who could ever take your place.
And our moments spent together, 
I'd do anything to retrace.
I am deeply sorry. I don't know what's wrong with me but I needed to post something. It's been so long that I posted something. I suck. :facepalm:
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Chezzy-Am's avatar
honestly speaking, this work did feel... personal... the first stanza and last stanza in particular were well written to be honest with you.

I think you should give yourself more credit. You're a really good writer. This work's a bit on the emotional side, no doubt, but it isn't bad writing at all. Its honest, its very sincere - its certainly put a lot of effort in establishing a sense of... two people lost in each other's company... something heartfelt in that moment honestly, which makes it all the more worthwhile to read.

I mention all this, because I - no matter how bitter or cynical I come out - tend to be a romantic at heart and so I like works which are by nature romantic.

Well written honestly. Keep writing :)