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Look at me!
I'm strong aren't I?
You think I'm weak because I'm skinny
Because you've seen me cry
Because I've lost hope
You've seen me quit
You've seen me break apart
You think I'm Weak
But have you forgotten?
I walked through the storm, when everyone else hid inside
I stood again after I fell
I walked in the darkness
I mend my heart after it was shattered
Whenever you cried, you had a shoulder to cry on
I had no one
Yet I wiped my tears and put a smile on my face
You've made fun of me, insulted me
But I'm still standing here, facing you
Does that make me weak?
You've called me names, picked on me
Forced me on my knees
Humiliated me
But still I'm here
Because I know I can face it all
Overcome all my fears
Push away the pain
And once, just once be happy
I'll do it someday
Because I'm not weak
I'm strong, aren't I?
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:iconhollyleaf12345:
hollyleaf12345 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
Exactly! Sometimes people have a different kind of strength and you've captured it beautifully Hug 
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
Yes you aré very very strong
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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:iconadrianarosabell:
adrianarosabell Featured By Owner May 12, 2014
Hug 
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YourDAMOCLES Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, you are.
You are.
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww! Thank you! :hug:
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YourDAMOCLES Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I mean it.

I know the feeling, those words apply to me as well; so yes you are strong.
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry that you faced such things.:tighthug:
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YourDAMOCLES Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
We all do at certain points, some of us all over their lives. But we gotta try to cope with it, as you did, as I did; as we still do.

That emote, haha, each time I see it.
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree. Sucks though.

Lol, what about it? :P
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:iconyourdamocles:
YourDAMOCLES Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It does.

It makes me me smile each time, it's another funny one.
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh :XD:
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
One word! AMAZING!!!!
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Two words! THANK YOU :D
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:iconalittlebitoffaith:
alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
haha :) u r really good artist
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
.. That means so much to me! Thank you! :heart:
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Ur very welcome the words I just said r true don't give up art ever
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug:
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:iconempurplethepanda:
EmpurpleThePanda Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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:iconempurplethepanda:
EmpurpleThePanda Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Brought tears to my eyes that did.
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aWW :hug:
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EmpurpleThePanda Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=>
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:iconksmoser:
ksmoser Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Professional Photographer
Very nice.
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. =)
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phoenixrebirth88 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
I'm kinda thinking about my brother as I read this. Everything fits my life so far (except the skinny part, though I'm not fat either). If only people could see true strenght ...
Lovely poem by the way. Wish I could write like that.
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry.
Thank you!
I'm sure you're better. :)
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:iconmisfitablegrae:
MisfitableGrae Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012   Writer
In writing this, you proved that you are a brilliant poet and so very strong.
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww! Thank you so much! Means a lot to me. :tears: :hug:
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Jace-wayland-fan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
I really understand where you are coming from on this! I really love this one:)
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you soo much :hug:
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:iconasiph:
asiph Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hmmm
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:?
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:iconasiph:
asiph Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you expressed yourself well
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you =)
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:iconasiph:
asiph Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
youre welcome
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ZCDSummer Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow... this is amazing...

...You've somehow summed up everything I'm feeling in just one poem...
I can't even begin to explain xD
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you soo much :hug:

I'm actually happy I did ^^;
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:iconzcdsummer:
ZCDSummer Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome xD~
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chibilvr091 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You are strong, for writing this poem. It is so inspiring, and addresses the emotions that I have been having recently. Thank you so much for writing this. You have given me hope. :)
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you soo much :hug:

I'm glad I did :)
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Jokerman03 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
If I could I would try and describe this brilliant piece of work, but I can't, because you've already done it. The only thing that I can add to this is full stops, but it's kind of obvious when to take a breather haha.
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you soo much :hug:

Haha! ^^;

I always forget that :P
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Jokerman03 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No worries, I go nuts over punctuation haha.
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol :D
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:icondeejani:
deejani Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
u reminded me of ME :P NICE JOB !
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:iconslipcast-chrysalism:
slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you =)
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DarkLordAmy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011
can i use this as a caption i will give you full credit
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slipcast-chrysalism Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure :)

If the picture is on DA, can you gimme the link, I'd love to see it though :)
If you don't mind. ^^;
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DarkLordAmy Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011
Haha ^_^ i would give you the link, if where anything but facebook :p
(I'm very personal about my captions and yours was perfect for my pic :P I hope you don't mind.)
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